Original Audio:
Acoustic Version (actual video):
Lyrics:
I wonder if Jack and Diane ever made it
After the drums and the guitars all faded
Was the best they could do good enough
Or did the heartland just swallow 'em up
How did my mom and my dad ever do it
If there were troubles then we never knew it
I guess they had each other and that was enough
You know you can't keep the ground from shaking, no matter how hard you try,
You can't keep the sunsets from fading, you gotta treat you love like
You're jumping off a rope swing maybe 'cause the whole thing is really just a shot in the dark
You gotta love like there's no such thing as a broken heart
You gotta love like there's no such thing as a broken heart
What am I gonna tell my kids when they see
All of this bullshit that goes down on TV
When the whole world is down on its luck
I gotta make sure they keep that chin up
Cry when it hurts, laugh when it's funny
Chase after the dream, don't chase after the money
And know we got each other, that's what's up
'Cause you can't keep the ground from shaking, no matter how hard you try
You can't keep the sunsets from fading, you gotta treat you love like
You're jumping off a rope swing maybe cause the whole thing is really just a shot in the dark
You gotta love like there's no such thing as a broken heart
You gotta love like there's no such thing as a broken heart
You gotta love like there's no such thing as a broken heart
'Cause you can't keep the ground from shaking, no matter how hard you try
You can't keep the sunsets from fading, you gotta treat you love like
You're jumping off a rope swing maybe 'cause the whole thing is really just a shot in the dark
You gotta love like there's no such thing as a broken heart
You gotta love, love, love, love
You gotta love, love, love, love
You gotta love like there's no such thing as a broken heart
Analysis:
Old Dominion creates this fairly new country song through catchy rhymes and good rhetoric. It’s a tune I heard in my car on my way home not too long ago and it stuck in my mind. In this specific song, diction and clever phrasing lead to an optimistic and happy-go-lucky tone.
To start, he opens his song with an analogy to a previous song, written by John Mellencamp called Jack and Diane (linked to the right), referencing their own struggles. This higher understanding appeals to the ethos of the audience. In this case, the audience would be generally, people who listen to country music on the radio, or specifically people who listen to Old Dominion. However, before the song even starts, their credibility as a well-known singer/songwriter group was previously established to their target audience.
This tune appeals to logos through rhyming lines and good structure. The song itself gets stuck in your head and caught on repeat, making the audience want to find the song and listen again. It flows in a very nice way, including analogies which give a stronger sense of voice, like the allusion in his opening stanza. “I wonder if Jack and Diane ever made it / After the drums and the guitars all faded / Was the best they could do good enough / Or did the heartland just swallow 'em up,” and personal experiences, like his reference to his kids in the fourth stanza, “What am I gonna tell my kids when they see / All of this bullshit that goes down on TV / When the whole world is down on its luck / I gotta make sure they keep that chin up.” Right here, they find a way to appeal to an even larger audience, targeting parents who are listening to the radio on the way home or older siblings who care about the future of their younger brothers and sisters.
To continue, Old Dominion appeals to the pathos of their audience through imperative connections, like the connections in the first and fourth stanzas, and the reference to his mom and dad getting along in the second stanza. They appeal to an audience of people with a potentially rough childhood with divorced parents or parents who argue who wish they had a childhood more similar to the one he mentions. However, through this, Old Dominion also appeals to the other half of the audience who of which had happy parents with a strong bond, connecting their own experiences to those of the audiences.


Old Dominion successfully creates an effective song with a catchy tune in this example (but I guess if they hadn’t, I probably would not have heard this song on the radio on my way home one night). His sturdy diction really creates an eased atmosphere and optimistic tone. His style and language used is very appealing and does a good job targeting his audience.
Livvy! Another great blog and I am slightly surprised that you didn't use "Maybe in Memphis" for the song :D.
ReplyDeleteGoing off of the rubric, your writing flows and you show an appreciation to the song. You dived into the diction, logos, and pathos that the song brings to the table. You also use quotes and actually talk about them, not just put them there to say that you used them. I also love how you were able to use the vocabulary from the beginning of the year like finding an allusion in the song. If I were to grade you, I would definitely give you a band 1.
The one thing that you didn't mention in this blog is the mention of ethos. You clearly dug deeply into the song on logos and pathos, but (unless I missed it) there was no ethos. I understand that sometimes, it's hard to bring out all three, but that would be the only thing that I would add to this wonderful blog. Great job!
I messed up the second part...To add on to my thoughts on the ethos, you can say that Old Dominion appeals to ethos because he has had his heart broken. He uses this song to show the fact even though he was hurt, he's still looking for the love that he described in the song.
DeleteI messed up the second part...To add on to my thoughts on the ethos, you can say that Old Dominion appeals to ethos because he has had his heart broken. He uses this song to show the fact even though he was hurt, he's still looking for the love that he described in the song.
DeleteThis was really good! I really liked how you brought up so many different parts of the song and brought up different aspects that really help to portray the meaning and purpose of the song. You developed your thoughts well and I was clearly able to understand the message that was being stated even though I have never heard the song before. I would give this a low band 1 because although you did a great job, I think you could have added a little more on the song itself and how the diction influenced the meaning. Overall, this was a really good blog!
ReplyDeleteI think this is pretty good. I really liked your structure and phrasing of ideas. You did a good job using quotes and analyzing them rather than just stating them and moving on. You developed your points well and really supported your thesis. However I think you really should have talked about the repetition of certain words and they effect the overall song. For instance the writer repeats the word heart throughout which may be very significant to the overall tone. Overall good job!
ReplyDeleteOlivia, this is definitely a Band 1 paper! There was clear, unwavering structure throughout and also you had a very strong sense of voice. You hit all major points of the analysis and developed your thoughts very well. Though I do feel like a big improvement would've been adding more quotes from the actual song, that's just me knitpicking. Amazing job!
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