Recently, the 45th President of the United States was inaugurated into office. He, like all those before him, read an inaugural address and he, like all those before him, had some pros and some cons.
However, before I get into it, I want to make a few things clear:

B.) I am not going to use his name in the first half of this entry. There is a strong negative connotation attached to his 5 letter name and I want you to do your best at giving me a fair chance to explain my thoughts. Everyone already knows who I’m talking about -- why not experiment?

In order to make sure I’ve covered my bases, I’m going into quick detail on the audience -American citizens, radical terrorists, and citizens of other countries around the world- the purpose -basically to introduce himself to America, complexly to unite a country of divided citizens through diction and tone- his subject -to introduce the “future” of America- the speaker -the 45th President of the US- and the occasion -the inauguration of a new president of a different party.
Regarding the actual words of the speech, a few major points stuck out to me. About 6 minutes into his speech, he mentions, “...Mothers and children trapped in poverty in our inner cities; rusted-out factories scattered like tombstones across the landscape of our nation; an education system, flush with cash, but which leaves our young and beautiful students deprived of knowledge; and the crime and gangs and drugs that have stolen too many lives and robbed our country of so much unrealized potential.” Hit me in the pathos. Throughout the rest of the speech, he uses phrases like, “refusing to defend … disrepair and decay. … ravages of other countries … stand at the birth of a new millennium,” where pathos cannot be applicable but the choice in diction makes room for logos. The words that actually make up the speech and the tone that’s based off the context makes his points sound like logic. Common knowledge. And, in that sense, I feel like this speech was effective.
However, due to the lost ethos from his campaigning, I don’t believe this speech was effective. While our new president drives one half of the country to happiness, he drives the other half to madness. He damaged his reputation throughout his 17ish months of campaigning through the use of degrading language, inappropriate decisions, and aggressive argumentation. When he entered this inauguration on January 20th, 2017, there was no combination of words he could have used to readily satisfy the general population. Some citizens were far too through with him before he even stepped foot in office while on the other hand other citizens took his words as gospel faster than they even came out of his mouth. Our country is split in two extremes and, despite his speech touching on the necessities of bringing back a unified US (stated toward the conclusion of his speech “When America is united, America is totally unstoppable.”), nothing he could have said could have changed the minds of those who stand firm in their opinions. In that sense, I do not feel like this speech was effective. But I do not think that any speech given in this social situation would be, in this sense, effective.
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I want to reenforce the fact that I am not bringing my political standpoint in on this. I think that can arouse unwanted prejudice toward my blog, no matter who or what I agree with.
In my Government and Economics class, we’re also covering speeches from Kennedy, Reagan, and Carter in comparison to Trump. Since we have gone into most detail on Kennedy so far, I am going to use his inauguration speech of 1961 (yes, the “ask not what your country can do for you - ask what you can do for your country” speech) to compare to Trump’s.

A second difference would have to be the difference in where the two leaders were looking when they gave the speech. Kennedy seemed to have had his face toward the future, stating it “… will not be finished in the first one hundred days. Nor will it be finished in the first one thousand days, nor in the life of this administration, nor even perhaps in our lifetime on this planet. But let us begin.” Trump seemed to have his face looking at the past and present, stating “For too long, a small group in our nation’s Capital has reaped the rewards of government while the people have borne the cost” and then went on to discuss some issues with the past. However, do not take my words as a complete generalization. My statements can be proven wrong with few specific quotes just as they have been proven right with my few quotes.
Similarly, both speeches discussed the importance of unification. Both presidents were facing a split country. Kennedy at the heart of the civil rights movement and Trump at the heart of a modern day civil rights movement. Kennedy had acknowledged the strength of unification in his quote, “United there is little we cannot do … Divided there is little we can do.” And Trump discussed this in a point I made earlier. Both of these presidents were trying to motivate their people to a new world and a new chance at unification.

And, I am going to leave off with that as I currently am approaching my bedtime and these past few days I’ve started feeling run down and slightly sick. All the sleep I run away from on a daily is finally catching up to me.
Thanks for reading!!
I really enjoyed your blog. The pictures and gifs take off some of the seriousness of of your writing, which in my opinion helped with what you were trying to avoid. I understand and agree with a majority of the things you said about him.
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I really enjoyed your blog and how you started it out I think that was a really good Idea. I like the content of your blog and analyzation of ethos, logos and pathos.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you took this blog and had such a unique idea. The focus of your blog being on the writing and rhetoric rather than personal opinions made it a very good analysis!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed how you stated that this isn't a bashing of Trump and how you weren't going to bring in your political views to this post (since it is just about effectiveness). However, I did notice that you did slip up a little bit, stating that his speech wasn't all that effective because of the things he said in his 17 month campaign. However, I do understand that those rue things he said did have a large impact on his inaugural speech and how people viewed him during it. I liked how you compared the way in which each speaker used their language. I never really took into account the fact that Trump barely used any figurative language, whereas Kennedy practically only used figurative language. It's also interesting how you mention that both presidents mentioned something about unity of our nation in their inaugural addresses. This post is absolutely amazing, especially because you analyze each speech using each of the rhetorical devices and you don't bring in your political opinion into it.
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness I absolutely admired the A and B sections of the blog. It let's the readers know what's up and I love it, haha. Overall, I could see the effort put into your blog and it made it beyond amazing. I liked hearing your findings within the speeches, both Kennedy's and Trump's. Great job!
ReplyDeleteLivvy, I really enjoyed reading you blog! I also compared Kennedy to Trump, but you gave more information on topics that I didn't even think about, like where each president was facing (past, present, or future). That was a really good point to bring up. I also like how you told us that you were comparing the speeches in one of your classes and gave credit to Andrah for bringing up the topic of figurative language and how Kennedy and Trump used it differently. Kennedy using it as if it's his job and Trump using it literally. I feel like telling people how you got the information is important and you did just that. Good job!
ReplyDeleteYou have some great points, such as the difference between looking toward to future and looking into the past. I feel as though Kennedy is more hopeful that in time, we will come together, where as Trump thinks he can solve all the problems within the span of being in office. All politics opinions aside, your blog is very well written and proves an unbiased view on the two speeches. Very well written, and I love the pictures!
ReplyDeleteOlivia, you did an amazing job with this post. I love how I can always see your personality shine through your writing. I admire how you left your personal political views out of this post as I agree that many can get bogged down in a set way of thinking. Through this, it allowed for readers to grasp their own opinion of the effectiveness, but with aid using your unbiased thoughts and ideas. I always love reading your posts! Another great post!
ReplyDeleteYou looked at this speech from a strictly speech context based perspective and I can really appreciated that. I felt you should have went over and analyzed more of the audience though, who was target and who did he actually appeal to and in what way. All in all great job.
ReplyDeleteOverall I really like the way you structured this post. The choice of not using Trump's name in the beginning was an interesting take on analyzing his speech. To improve I would make reference to more than just the text of the speech. Talking about the delivery of the speech is just as important as the message. I think the length of this post was really good for the prompt. The pacing and structure of the post was solid. Good work.
ReplyDeleteThis is the first time that I've had the chance to read your writing and I'm extermely impressed with your writing and I can't wait to read more. I really enjoyed that right off the bat you had stated that this was going to remain unbiased that you accomplished that very well. It seems that you definitely though out your ideas and the words that you had chosen were chosen very carefully. Plus, the rhetorics that you had pointed out in th both of the speech were done really well
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