Upon my initial opinion, I had definitely thought the best poem we had read in class by Edwin Arlington Robinson was Mr. Flood’s Party because of how deep we traced it back. I enjoyed watching Mr. Scalia get so worked up over learning something new from Mr. Eder and how eager he was to share what they found with the rest of the class. But with the more I thought about it, the more I realized that it wasn’t the best poem to me. I was confusing my favorite poem with someone else’s favorite. At first I didn’t even understand - nor do I even now fully, completely understand - what the poem means, even at a literal sense. So after thinking a little harder, I decided that I found the best poem, out of the three we had gone through in class, to be Richard Cory.
Without even reading a line, the initial display of an appealing quatrain and 16 line poem gives off an attractive lure. The poem is almost screaming “Read me” with the straightforward setup. It’s easy on the eyes and it doesn’t give off the bite-off-more-than-you-can-chew-I-dare-you look that Mr. Flood’s Party and Luke Havergal have with their intricate rhyme schemes and immense number of lines in the poem. Richard Cory gives off a much simpler enticement that links all the way to it’s set up.

For me, when I first read this poem I was slightly shocked. Mr. Scalia claimed that anyone who was shocked just didn’t know how to read but I felt justified in my reaction. I was expecting more of a buildup of Richard Cory. He was characterized in such a false light. Who was this guy? Why did the people on the pavement cherish him? Why was his life so respected? And I agree, it was inevitable for a dramatic line to take over and take Richard Cory’s life. But I was not expecting it so soon or so suddenly. 16 lines doesn't seem like enough time to construct Richard Cory's character. And the creation of Richard Cory gave almost the same information as the creation of the people, “we people on the pavement.” Was Richard Cory a symbol of the light or the dark in this poem, the yin or the yang? It seemed that the people on the pavement found more light in their lives, as they “worked and waited for the light,” than Richard Cory - clean-favored Richard Cory - did.

This poem appeals to me because it reminds me of myself. I, like this 16 line poem, appear simple on the outside. I’m a three sport athlete, straight-A student, a member of a very supportive family, involved in various clubs and activities around the school, and (I think) I always look put together (to most extents). But sometimes I’m looking for that reader who just doesn’t believe me, who just doesn’t buy everything about my outer Richard Cory. I'm looking for the reader who will read between my 16 lines. I’m sure as heck not going to put a bullet through my head but sometimes I do have bad days. Which makes me slightly more complex than that of a simple quatrain. Because even when my day’s rough, I’m still the one who’s expected to look after everyone else. I’m definitely no king to any "people on the pavement" but I am a caring, almost motherly figure to all of the people in my life. I also relate to the people who look up to Richard Cory because I will go without the meat and, where I try my hardest not to, I'll curse the bread. I work hard for what I believe in and what I want and I wait for the light. The poem Richard Cory was best to me because I could connect myself to the two stories written.
Now, I know there is so much more to this poem than what I barely touched upon, but I gave reason as to why I thought this was the best poem, why I thought Edwin Arlington Robinson did the best job with this piece of writing. To the best of my ability (which isn't a lot because poetry doesn't rub me the right way), I gave reason as to why Richard Cory was Edwin Arlington Robinson's best poem.
Livvy! I know how you feel about poetry, but I couldn't see those feelings in your blog. You went into great detail about how you can relate to this poem and I loved that. In the sixth paragraph, I felt like you put yourself in Robinson's shoes when you said, "I'm looking for the reader who will read between my 16 lines." This one simple line is proof that you do know poetry more than you're giving yourself credit for. Not only are you connecting yourself to the poem, but to the author as well. Adding to that, Robinson made it seem like Richard Cory was the main idea of the poem, but since you stepped into Robinson's shoes, you were able to bring out the, "we people on the pavement" and tell us not only how you relate to both, Richard Cory and "we people..." but also the role of the people watching and admiring Richard Cory. Good job!
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I completely agree with what you said about the Richard Cory poem. I think that you went into a lot of detail as to why it was your favorite poem and I think that is very justified by the details you included in the blog. I really like the unique twist you made by comparing yourself to Richard Cory because I had not thought of it that way and since it is relatable, that could be why it ultimately was your favorite. Overall, I think this was a well thought out blog. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI agree with everything you wrote. With the part about how poetry doesn't rub off on you, I am the same way. I liked how you went into detail and talked about how this poem is the best fit for you. I also liked how you tied this back to you and how Richard Cory could be just like you. I feel that you used good quotes to help bring everything together. Great job best friend, you rock!
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I loved this post! You did such a good job of explaining the poem and what made the poem good. I could feel that you connected with this poem on a very personal level. I also like how you brought up how your favorite poem was someone else favorite, not yours, and how you deiced which one was actually your favorite. Good job!
ReplyDeleteWow! good job on analyzing your strong ties with the poem, and good use of vocabulary!
ReplyDeleteI liked how the first paragraph was simplistic overall and jumped straight to the answer on which poem you favored. You looked at the poem from a different perspectives, unlike most of the other blogs, like finding the 16 line poem to be attractive. I think the most appealing part of this blog is your flow.
ReplyDeleteI really really really enjoyed reading this. You did an extremely good job explaining the poem and what it meant to you. I liked both the vocabulary you used and the pictures you used. Overall you did an amazing job.
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